Jensen's headspace was okay, even if writing the flashbacks made me want to give him a hug and a cookie, but I never realized just how much I use adverbs to describe how people speak until his POV no longer allowed me to do so. It would be a very difficult way to interact with the world, I think. Luckily, having Jared is going to improve things for him somewhat.
Thank you for a lovely comment! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
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Date: 2016-08-08 05:01 pm (UTC)Thank you for a lovely comment! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!