Since I started this, I was unable to put it down and I couldn't even make it as far as to reach out and grab my laptop. Just kept right on reading on my phone. Glued to this. The pacing was perfect, every single sentence flowed right into the next and the scenery - the sights, the sounds, the transparency of the shades. Honestly, this was one of those times I felt like I was right there, experiencing it all right along with Jensen. And I had a desperate urgency niggling the back of my mind all throughout every fiery hoop Jensen had to jump through. What a story you've told, and what a fully functioning world you've created. I want to explore your brain.
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Date: 2012-11-17 05:25 pm (UTC)Since I started this, I was unable to put it down and I couldn't even make it as far as to reach out and grab my laptop. Just kept right on reading on my phone. Glued to this. The pacing was perfect, every single sentence flowed right into the next and the scenery - the sights, the sounds, the transparency of the shades. Honestly, this was one of those times I felt like I was right there, experiencing it all right along with Jensen. And I had a desperate urgency niggling the back of my mind all throughout every fiery hoop Jensen had to jump through. What a story you've told, and what a fully functioning world you've created. I want to explore your brain.
Flawless. Just, flawless. ♥