It -was- smooth. I mean, wowee. I could picture Cloud remarking about it after their relationship develops a little. Y'know, how people always comment about a pick-up line far down the road? And then Zack would say exactly what was mentioned there, about how Cloud didn't appreciate what an awesome come-on it was.

I will wait faithfully for more Zack bartender action, because you wouldn't just leave him behind, would ya? Hee!

Glad I helped make your day better. :3